Matt Bellamy

Hey! Just a quick note, I edited the caps out of your title. :) I like the rhythm you make in this song. I can hear it, it kind of ...

Aww, this is very cute! I love the rhyming scheme - I love how you go AA,BB and then the last line doesn't rhyme with anything at all. For some ...

Hi! Well, when you preface your poem by telling people they probably won't understand it, it doesn't really fill me with confidence. :P At best it means you don't expect ...

Hey! I think this poem is very interesting and I like the concept a lot. It flows quite well and the rhyming is good, if a little predictable in places. ...

Hi! I think your poem starts out with a lot of promise. I love how you describe the night in the first stanza. Beautiful! However, I don't really get the ...

Hi! I like this poem. It's light-hearted and romantic and I think people would be able to relate to it. However, I have a bit of an issue with the ...

Hello! You use description very well in this poem, particularly in the first stanza, and that, linked with the emotion in the other stanzas, makes it pretty powerful. Especially because ...

I love this. It's very descriptive and personal, and I can see everything. You describe the emotion really well, and I especially like the way you ended it. I don't ...

Hi! I quite like this poem, but there are a couple of things that distracted me from it. Firstly, the colour is kind of difficult to read. No biggy, it's ...

Hi! I really like this. I think it's very simple but it's still effective, and people will be able to relate to it. It rhymes really well without sounding forced, ...

Hey! I quite like this. You said what you meant in an interesting way and also made it not only something that you can relate to yourself, but relateable for ...

Haha, awesome! Nice use of the word circumnavigate. :P There should be an apostrophe in F.R.E.D's Robotic Pad, but psshh, as if I can find anything else to complain about ...

Hello! You do a good job here of creating a gloomy mood, so well done. There are just a couple of things I think could be improved: it almost feels ...

Hello! I think this poem has potential - there is plenty of imagery you can build upon. However, it seems a little unfinished. I mean, the ending kinda sounds like ...

Hi! This starts off well, sounding like a diary at first. The first sentence is very blunt and draws the reader in. However, from there, you switch tenses a couple ...